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Featuring :iconlightbleueyes:'s Exile, named Blue.

I haven't drawn this dynamic duo in a long time xD And since it's been such a long time....why not draw them again? And so this is how it came out.

I *do* admit that I spent *too* long on the textures, smudges, background, lighting, filters ^^; I've never been so adventurous on GIMP, ever. In my life xD

So yeah, to sum it all up - these two are back in my gallery, doing mostly light-sided things in their free time...Mostly.

Juni belongs to me, and Blue belongs to :iconlightbleueyes: I have to admit that I had fun on her outfit, but I forgot the flowy-thing of the ribbon :stare:

And I'm not sure whether to put a mature content on this. xD I don't think so, because it's cartoon blood. Either that, or it's ketchup sauce. I think the latter would be more likely, considering Juni's insanity xD

I've been trying to draw a free gift for LBE for like, 3 months ^^; Finally got it out, and I have to say I'm happier with this than I've ever been, ever. In my life.

Done with that, and now for the commissions and requests! I've got a lot on my shoulders, but I promise to get everything done as soon as possible! ^^

Now people, leave me alone so I can finish my to-do list! xD
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:iconlightbleueyes:
Ok Let break this down shall we?

Vision: Well I can still see the drawing :D But it's a little dark, but it's nothing major :)

Originality: Of course it's original! It's our characters! And I love the background with all those dead bodies :D And Juni's face is priceless!

Technique: I love the technique! I love how you added textures, and the expressions on the characters!

Impact: Overall The impact is pretty strong, but you have to look at it closely to feel a very strong impact


Thank you for making this gift for me! :hug: Your deserve this critique! -LBE
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First proper critique ever
so here goes
Firstly, epic awesomesauce drawing, i just love it

Good points
the textures give it an interesting feel, very nice
and the girl with the dress, i think shes been dont really well, she has a body shape, which is good
The body and the hair of the second one are really good, as are the eyes of both the girls
The effects you have used give it and awesome feel, and the little dead people in the backround are epic!

now, things that could be improved
first off, the hardest thing of the body to draw (for me)
hands
i know, from drawing a heck of alot of manga, that
hands
can
be
HARD
but i found a good way to do hands is to start of with a circle, for the palm, then add fingers, look at your hand for refrence
but yea, you can probably find a good tutorial for hands, although in your style, those hands look good.
also, where she grips the sword, the hand has no back line, which im pretty sure it would
and with the girls, both of them, i notice there is shading on one, but not the other
and i have to say, your shading on the one that has it is epic.

im not the best critique person, because i dont do digital humans, but to be honest, i love this piece
love it

hope this helped, and hope i didnt sound harsh or anything
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:icontwilight-and-konan:
oh god
this is epic
so epic i did a proper critique
epic
nuff' said
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~Mystic-LightsCx Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:'D ASDFGHJKL I saw your critique, I loves it 8D Thanks for the critique! 8D 8D 8D 8D
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~TamiiForever Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
omg. I'm in love with how u drew blue!!!!!
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~Mystic-LightsCx Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD Thanks! I was testing some textures and expressions in this pic :3
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~TamiiForever Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's cool! :)
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~Mystic-LightsCx Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Do you want to join my join.me? :3
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~TamiiForever Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
okay! tho.. Idk what it is. people on tumblr talk about it quite some bit.
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~Mystic-LightsCx Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Comment when you want to, okay? :3
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~TamiiForever Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
okay.
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~Mystic-LightsCx Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay 8D
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