I haven't drawn this dynamic duo in a long time xD And since it's been such a long time....why not draw them again? And so this is how it came out.
I *do* admit that I spent *too* long on the textures, smudges, background, lighting, filters I've never been so adventurous on GIMP, ever. In my life xD
So yeah, to sum it all up - these two are back in my gallery, doing mostly light-sided things in their free time...Mostly.
Juni belongs to me, and Blue belongs to I have to admit that I had fun on her outfit, but I forgot the flowy-thing of the ribbon
And I'm not sure whether to put a mature content on this. xD I don't think so, because it's cartoon blood. Either that, or it's ketchup sauce. I think the latter would be more likely, considering Juni's insanity xD
I've been trying to draw a free gift for LBE for like, 3 months Finally got it out, and I have to say I'm happier with this than I've ever been, ever. In my life.
Done with that, and now for the commissions and requests! I've got a lot on my shoulders, but I promise to get everything done as soon as possible! ^^
Now people, leave me alone so I can finish my to-do list! xD
First proper critique ever so here goes Firstly, epic awesomesauce drawing, i just love it
Good points the textures give it an interesting feel, very nice and the girl with the dress, i think shes been dont really well, she has a body shape, which is good The body and the hair of the second one are really good, as are the eyes of both the girls The effects you have used give it and awesome feel, and the little dead people in the backround are epic!
now, things that could be improved first off, the hardest thing of the body to draw (for me) hands i know, from drawing a heck of alot of manga, that hands can be HARD but i found a good way to do hands is to start of with a circle, for the palm, then add fingers, look at your hand for refrence but yea, you can probably find a good tutorial for hands, although in your style, those hands look good. also, where she grips the sword, the hand has no back line, which im pretty sure it would and with the girls, both of them, i notice there is shading on one, but not the other and i have to say, your shading on the one that has it is epic.
im not the best critique person, because i dont do digital humans, but to be honest, i love this piece love it
hope this helped, and hope i didnt sound harsh or anything
Vision: Well I can still see the drawing
Originality: Of course it's original! It's our characters! And I love the background with all those dead bodies
Technique: I love the technique! I love how you added textures, and the expressions on the characters!
Impact: Overall The impact is pretty strong, but you have to look at it closely to feel a very strong impact
Thank you for making this gift for me!
so here goes
Firstly, epic awesomesauce drawing, i just love it
Good points
the textures give it an interesting feel, very nice
and the girl with the dress, i think shes been dont really well, she has a body shape, which is good
The body and the hair of the second one are really good, as are the eyes of both the girls
The effects you have used give it and awesome feel, and the little dead people in the backround are epic!
now, things that could be improved
first off, the hardest thing of the body to draw (for me)
hands
i know, from drawing a heck of alot of manga, that
hands
can
be
HARD
but i found a good way to do hands is to start of with a circle, for the palm, then add fingers, look at your hand for refrence
but yea, you can probably find a good tutorial for hands, although in your style, those hands look good.
also, where she grips the sword, the hand has no back line, which im pretty sure it would
and with the girls, both of them, i notice there is shading on one, but not the other
and i have to say, your shading on the one that has it is epic.
im not the best critique person, because i dont do digital humans, but to be honest, i love this piece
love it
hope this helped, and hope i didnt sound harsh or anything
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