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We're Back and Invincible! by Mystic-LightsCx We're Back and Invincible! by Mystic-LightsCx
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We're Back and Invincible!by Mystic-LightsCx

Fan Art / Digital Art / Drawings / Games©2012-2014 Mystic-LightsCx
Featuring :iconlightbleueyes:'s Exile, named Blue.

I haven't drawn this dynamic duo in a long time xD And since it's been such a long time....why not draw them again? And so this is how it came out.

I *do* admit that I spent *too* long on the textures, smudges, background, lighting, filters ^^; I've never been so adventurous on GIMP, ever. In my life xD

So yeah, to sum it all up - these two are back in my gallery, doing mostly light-sided things in their free time...Mostly.

Juni belongs to me, and Blue belongs to :iconlightbleueyes: I have to admit that I had fun on her outfit, but I forgot the flowy-thing of the ribbon :stare:

And I'm not sure whether to put a mature content on this. xD I don't think so, because it's cartoon blood. Either that, or it's ketchup sauce. I think the latter would be more likely, considering Juni's insanity xD

I've been trying to draw a free gift for LBE for like, 3 months ^^; Finally got it out, and I have to say I'm happier with this than I've ever been, ever. In my life.

Done with that, and now for the commissions and requests! I've got a lot on my shoulders, but I promise to get everything done as soon as possible! ^^

Now people, leave me alone so I can finish my to-do list! xD
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Critique by Orantmihi Nov 19, 2012, 7:00:16 AM
Hi there! First of, I want to tell you that you are doing a great job! The characters are original, they are well represented with their distinctive expressions and clothing.

The textures and smudges you used here could use improvement. The dark layer over the original drawing makes it hard to see and divers the focus point, which makes the watcher more easily lose their attention. The text and light bolt seem to slapped on top of the drawing and doesn't blend well as a whole. Also it's probably better not to use two different fonts as it doesn't add anything in this case.

I love the little dead figures in the background.

When you start drawing, you could think of the composition. Where am I going to place the characters? Will they be the centerpiece of my canvas? Where will the focus be? You can work towards that and be more considerate when you cut the edges when editing. Now the right edge seems to have just a little too much space were nothing's going on (just a blood splatter to fill up, which again doesn't add much).

I hope you don't feel discouraged, because I am only here to give you a few pointers on improving. If you keep this enthusiasm up for drawing, I can already tell that you will be a great artist within 4 years. Mark my words :)
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First proper critique ever
so here goes
Firstly, epic awesomesauce drawing, i just love it

Good points
the textures give it an interesting feel, very nice
and the girl with the dress, i think shes been dont really well, she has a body shape, which is good
The body and the hair of the second one are really good, as are the eyes of both the girls
The effects you have used give it and awesome feel, and the little dead people in the backround are epic!

now, things that could be improved
first off, the hardest thing of the body to draw (for me)
hands
i know, from drawing a heck of alot of manga, that
hands
can
be
HARD
but i found a good way to do hands is to start of with a circle, for the palm, then add fingers, look at your hand for refrence
but yea, you can probably find a good tutorial for hands, although in your style, those hands look good.
also, where she grips the sword, the hand has no back line, which im pretty sure it would
and with the girls, both of them, i notice there is shading on one, but not the other
and i have to say, your shading on the one that has it is epic.

im not the best critique person, because i dont do digital humans, but to be honest, i love this piece
love it

hope this helped, and hope i didnt sound harsh or anything
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Twilight-and-Konan Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist
oh god
this is epic
so epic i did a proper critique
epic
nuff' said
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Mystic-LightsCx Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:'D ASDFGHJKL I saw your critique, I loves it 8D Thanks for the critique! 8D 8D 8D 8D
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TamiiForever Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
omg. I'm in love with how u drew blue!!!!!
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Mystic-LightsCx Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD Thanks! I was testing some textures and expressions in this pic :3
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TamiiForever Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's cool! :)
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Mystic-LightsCx Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Do you want to join my join.me? :3
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TamiiForever Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
okay! tho.. Idk what it is. people on tumblr talk about it quite some bit.
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Mystic-LightsCx Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Comment when you want to, okay? :3
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TamiiForever Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
okay.
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Mystic-LightsCx Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay 8D
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